I crumbled for good
Your face moved
smiled
in a faceless crowd
I smiled back
and it truly...
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I crumbled for good
Your face moved
smiled
in a faceless crowd
I smiled back
and it truly showed
what I felt inside.
I was a rock
until you came
and broke me
into pieces
I crumbled
Letting myself go
With the flow.
My heart
beats so fast
when I look
into your eyes
I realize
That all I need is
to be your wife.
I count on you
to stay and gather
what’s left of my world
and to grow old
together
for I know
that one day
I’ll make a story to be told.
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bina ji
first off, so nice of you to go back to an old post!! thanks so much.. glad you liked this one!!
cheers n love
OS
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OS
now this one is hopeful
i like that :)
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cheti yeah i do.. i don't take chances!!! ha ha... thanks for the alert pal..
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But beware, things like that have happened ! Hope you have offline copies of your poems and blogs !
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ha ha.. luckily it didn't.. sulekha knows OS wud sure get an heart attack in case it happens!! lol..
imagine almost a year's efforts lost in just one clean swipe!! omg i can't imagine it!!
cheers n love
OS
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yeah ! that explains it ! I thought Sulekha deleted them by mistake and reposted etc etc ! but nothing really fit !
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i tried importing all by blogs from blogspot just to see how the new feature is functioning and it all got lined up.. had to delete them all one by one... does that explain.. what;s more, the blogs were the ones already posted on sulekha.. he he.. thanks for those comments man.. i've always liked them straight and cool like you!!!
cheers n love
OS
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whoooo ! gushiness is flowing ! And so sweetly too ! cool !
BTW : I saw a tonne of "Obscurity Speaks posted....." notifications but only one new blog ! Whats the catch ?
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Dsampathji,
sure i will keep that in mind!! thanks for being here!! :)
cheers n love
OS
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dear os,
the cake
that crumbles is the tastiest...
so look of r theon wo crumbles at your sight
and chose him for any honours...
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