Broken Strings

  Jul 16 2008  | Views 420 |  Comments  (41)
I sit on the porch Waiting to see your face Counting the minutes And watching the stranger... Expand

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  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

hmmmm.. perhaps i shud do the latter... forward it to my 'would be'.. why didn't i think of it!!! thanks for those lovely comments... i feel so good about you being here..
cheers n love
OS



  Opulence posted 1 month ago

Hi OS,

Awesome!  Very emotional.....its hurts when someone whom you wait for suspects you? by any means "are you married" if yes then you got to explain to your guy that he had actually hurt you by asking you such a question,   if no.....then this poem should be forwarded to your "would be"....it would help in future :)



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

bina ji
your words show the depth of your understanding...thankk so much..
cheers n love
OS

 



  binagupta posted 1 month ago

OS
could feel the pain n pathos
when one gets ready n eagerly waits for the loved one
then the subsequent brush off really hurts



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

Sunkan ji
Thank you so much for the comments as well as the wonderful pic!!
cheers n love
OS



  sunkan posted 1 month ago

wonderful words so emotional..sunkan




  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

ha ha.. dad i know what you mean't.. my second language was tamil at school!! yea uudal is the right one!! 

cheers n love
Dot



  N K Ravi posted 1 month ago

dear dot,

I think I have made a spelling mistake here. OODAL may mean different it shoiuld be UuDAL before Koodal.

Cheers and love

Dad.



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

bloodlime,
very true words.. well said.. with sands in our feet and tears on our sleeve.. good one..
thanks for those lovely comments dude.. keep coming
cheers n love
OS

 



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 1 month ago

dad,
thanks for that.. you have so beautifully clarified the situation.. that too with an example from tamil literature!!
cheers n love
dot





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