I lie there
in my wee home
surrounded by
the fluid of care
and love
hoping and yearnin...
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I lie there
in my wee home
surrounded by
the fluid of care
and love
hoping and yearning
to see her face
to see the world
to see my family
someday…
oh, how I wish
I was born!
I hear her-
reciting the verses
singing a lullaby
her fond coochy coos
her chiming bangles
and rhyming anklets
oh, how I wish
I was born!
I can feel her
the warmth of her hand
all over me
Her gaze -
down on me
watching me grow
The air of love
that surrounds me
Oh, how I wish
I was born!
I hear voices
That fill me with qualm
their talks turn
to whispers
I hear her sobs
I feel her tears
on the walls
of my little home
I long to be there
and listen to
all they say
Oh how I wish
I was born!
I hear her
as she says
She will miss me
As I realize
the truth
my eyes fill
with tears
will you make me bleed mamma?
Will you let me die?
I will miss you too..
She hears me not
I lie there silently
Holding on to dear life
Oh, how I wish
I was not formed!
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OS
Poignant words an unborn child would speak if only it could.......beautifully written.
lakshmi
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I'm afraid your message here is hardly obscure
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vish
thanks for those comments... glad you liked it!!! that's a good suggestion you gave )))
cheers n luv
OS
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Thank you :))))))))))))))))) thats better :))
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ooops sorry meera. :)))
cheers
OS
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Touching and haunting.....A must read for all those who could be parents.Will definitely aid family planning if it can be effectively translated into all languages... suggest u send it to Prasson Pandey or Piyush Pandey who have the infrastructure to convert this into a scoial campaign ad
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ji?!?
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Ranjini,
thanks for those wonderful views and comments... glad you liked it!!! :)))
cheers n luv
OS
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bhavna,
girl that was very modest too :))) you write more beautifully.. yea the subject i chose bcoz i've had the bad experience those ppl..couldn't stand them... so jus thot of letting out my emotions on Sulekha :))) glad you liked it!!! you have already given more than your vote girl!!
love ya
cheers n luv
OS
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Meera ji,
this is the first time am having you on my pages :))) honored... thanks for those wonderful comments.
cheers n luv
OS
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