Don’t Kill Me Mamma!

  Apr 17 2008  | Views 1277 |  Comments  (79)
  I lie there in my wee home surrounded by the fluid of care and love hoping and yearnin... Expand

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  ObscuritySpeaks posted 4 mnths ago

heeyyy spk,

now now come on.. dude you've left me so curious... what is it??? my head would break till i know how it sounds like to ya :))))... anyways glad you liked it!!!

cheers n love
OS



  spk100 posted 4 mnths ago

Then I hear voices
That fill me with qualm
their talks turn
to whispers
I hear her sobs
I feel her tears
on the walls
of my little home
I long to be there
and listen to
all they have to say



reading these lines makes me think (reminds me) of something else... i dont want to put it here. maybe another place, another time.

but an interesting poem - nicely written :)



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 4 mnths ago

Hey Cheti,
sorry if my blog made you so dull.. cheer up man... :)))) thanks for the comments
cheers n love
OS



  cheti posted 4 mnths ago



The last two lines, the change in them, almost brought a lump to my throat.



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 4 mnths ago

heeyyy maya,
thanks girl for stopping by and for the comments... 
cheers n love
OS



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 4 mnths ago

Brat,
don't feel so.. am sure your are more than just a man..a good human cos you sincerely repent for what you put your wife through..isn't that more than enough???.. am sure your wifey will be more than happy to have you.. who has a good feeling for women... she must be proud of u!!!! relaxxx..
cheers n love
OS
 



  ObscuritySpeaks posted 4 mnths ago

eblitz 
thanks dude!! 
cheers n love
OS



  mayaonline posted 4 mnths ago

I have often wondered if they ever knew their plight, were they ever aware? nicely written.



  bratgaba posted 4 mnths ago


About the comment you left on my blog (Kill the Girls):

Yup, sure am glad your parents didn't kill you, thats for sure.

But yet, can't get rid of the feeling that we don't deserve you guys.  When I look at the stuff you go through day in-day out, I can't help but feel puny.  And undeserving.  My considerable wife, for instance - I promise you, if I had to go thru half the crap that I made her undergo, I would've been in an asylum by now.  And inspite of the odds, you guys are the ones who go through life smiling, waiting for a new dawn.....mark my words - change for the better in this world, will always come around because WOMEN live here.  We men?  We're too busy bombing countries, spreading hate via religion and politics, too self-engrossed to care, too insecure of our 'manliness' to cry....



  eblitz posted 4 mnths ago

i understand....  good emotion.... well written, keep it coming....all the best.....





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