I lie there
in my wee home
surrounded by
the fluid of care
and love
hoping and yearnin...
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I lie there
in my wee home
surrounded by
the fluid of care
and love
hoping and yearning
to see her face
to see the world
to see my family
someday…
oh, how I wish
I was born!
I hear her-
reciting the verses
singing a lullaby
her fond coochy coos
her chiming bangles
and rhyming anklets
oh, how I wish
I was born!
I can feel her
the warmth of her hand
all over me
Her gaze -
down on me
watching me grow
The air of love
that surrounds me
Oh, how I wish
I was born!
I hear voices
That fill me with qualm
their talks turn
to whispers
I hear her sobs
I feel her tears
on the walls
of my little home
I long to be there
and listen to
all they say
Oh how I wish
I was born!
I hear her
as she says
She will miss me
As I realize
the truth
my eyes fill
with tears
will you make me bleed mamma?
Will you let me die?
I will miss you too..
She hears me not
I lie there silently
Holding on to dear life
Oh, how I wish
I was not formed!
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heeyyy spk,
now now come on.. dude you've left me so curious... what is it??? my head would break till i know how it sounds like to ya :))))... anyways glad you liked it!!!
cheers n love
OS
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reading these lines makes me think (reminds me) of something else... i dont want to put it here. maybe another place, another time.
but an interesting poem - nicely written :)
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Hey Cheti,
sorry if my blog made you so dull.. cheer up man... :)))) thanks for the comments
cheers n love
OS
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The last two lines, the change in them, almost brought a lump to my throat.
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heeyyy maya,
thanks girl for stopping by and for the comments...
cheers n love
OS
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Brat,
don't feel so.. am sure your are more than just a man..a good human cos you sincerely repent for what you put your wife through..isn't that more than enough???.. am sure your wifey will be more than happy to have you.. who has a good feeling for women... she must be proud of u!!!! relaxxx..
cheers n love
OS
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eblitz
thanks dude!!
cheers n love
OS
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I have often wondered if they ever knew their plight, were they ever aware? nicely written.
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About the comment you left on my blog (Kill the Girls):
Yup, sure am glad your parents didn't kill you, thats for sure.
But yet, can't get rid of the feeling that we don't deserve you guys. When I look at the stuff you go through day in-day out, I can't help but feel puny. And undeserving. My considerable wife, for instance - I promise you, if I had to go thru half the crap that I made her undergo, I would've been in an asylum by now. And inspite of the odds, you guys are the ones who go through life smiling, waiting for a new dawn.....mark my words - change for the better in this world, will always come around because WOMEN live here. We men? We're too busy bombing countries, spreading hate via religion and politics, too self-engrossed to care, too insecure of our 'manliness' to cry....
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i understand.... good emotion.... well written, keep it coming....all the best.....
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